in the conversation class

in the conversation class.......(home work)

My sef and my family
my name is Yenni, I am a nurse. I am  a wife. My husband is a teacher. he teachs at SMK 1 Tilkam.
I have three children. the oldest a son. He studies at ISI Jogjakarta. My second chid a girl. Her seventeen parties in May next year. She studies at SMANIVA on  eleven deegrees
The youngest a son. He wants to study in MAN Gulai Bancah. Now he studies at MTsN Candung on the end degree.
I am a happy woman.
We lived in Padang, when I studied in PSIK UNAND, in the mean while my children were young. My husband with patienly put in order care our children. I have rightfully proud for him, I want to say "Thanks my dear, you give me a moment to forward looking"

Now...to Mr Andy (my teacher)
I hope you repair my tensis if are falses. because I want to be good in English and my target is TOEFEL more than fivty hundred.....